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Part2

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Part two
as my mind walks, I enter the other vamper’s mind...to my surprise.. Its not a vamper. I slightly jump in shock but continue to wander in the mind.. Its a female.. A vary different mix... a werefox... female... her name... dang. I lost it.
I jump from her mind and watch her head snap to a direction as something moves. (Now!) As she’s distracted I fall into my shadow/familiar. I slowly rise from her shadow behind her, lightly clear my throat and speak, “hello..may I help you?” she screams and jumps as I accidently surprise her. “its ok” I sit back and cross my legs and smile “im not here to hurt you” I continue to smile.
“W-w-who are you?” she stutters I softly and calmly reply “my name is Kain..im just here passing through...may I know your name?” silence.. I can see she’s slightly trembling... she quietly answers “Phoenix” I continue to smile and gently laugh “well phoenix.. Its nice to meet you, say.. Why are you here?”  She slightly looks away “er..im here because..im..im running away from..a group that’s trying to kill me...”  “I see” as I sit in the fading sunlight, my white silk shirt burning orang, my dark blue navy pants and vest growing darker, shadows growing under my eyes, my bright red hair glowing in the suns final rays.. “we should go.... and soon...” she starts to look about.. And swiftly, “lycan will be out and I have smelt them.. This town is a lycan village.” I hold out my hand.. She slightly moves away from it... the sun just slipping away from view... the light slowly sliding over me and Phoenix, I hear the snarl of several several werewolves, closing in, I hold out my right arm and my shadow creeps over it to my hand. Slowly it forms into a sword.. The shadow slips away and there in my hand sits clenched is a silver sword, my eyes gleaming in the night, bright soft blue... my pupils turn from a circle to a slits, all the pitch black darkness shifts to a light green, I see every thing, as a werewolf lets out a howl Phoenix jumps and clings about my waist, “gah! What the heck girl?”... as I place my left arm about her, I hold her close and slip into my familiar, the pure black abyss engulfing me and her, she screams loudly and holds my hips tight as we sink into the darkness.
As we slip through the darkness we land upon a silk sheeted bed, I slip from her arms and stand across the room, she falls over on the bed shuddering and mumbling, she screams again and then falls silent “better?” I quietly ask.. She’s deeply breathing.. Panting... I wait quietly leaning ageist the wall my arms gently accosted my chest “I-I-I don’t know...” I softly sigh, lean forward and walk away to the door, I quietly open it and leave the room, I softly whisper into the room “rest well... and if you want there is other clothing in the closet across from the bed” I silently close the door and walk away.
Down the hall I quietly sit and wait in my library, silently reading, the clock slowly tics and tics as the sun slowly rises hours later...I fall asleep as I read, my body sprawled upon a couch book in my face, my left hand over the side of the couch with my left leg, my right arm holding my book and my right leg straight out upon the couch as I quietly snooze...
part two woot =O next part comeing soon x'D please keep reading =)
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Daiquiriglass's avatar
Mhhh, part one was more mysterious...but there also was less action, so it's understandable:XD:
Good use of the points of suspension, especially in the first part:very appropriate.But try to vary more your punctuation according to the situation, in particular colons and semicolons, which are not very used nowadays, but are still an important part of the grammar.
Keep it up!!!Can't wait for part 3^^